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THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD WITH OWNED AD RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011.

THE CHART BELOW SHOW THE PERCENTAGE OF HOUSEHOLD WITH OWNED AD RENTED ACCOMMODATION IN ENGLAND BETWEEN 1918 AND 2011. PR5Kp
THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE NUMBER OF HOUSEHOLD IN ENGLAND WITH ACCOOMMODATION RENTED AND OWNED FROM 1918 TO 2011. THE UNITS ARE MEASURED IN PERCENTAGE. OVERALL, THE TRENDS FOR OWNING A HOUSE INCLINED DRASTICALLY WHEREAS, THE PERCENTILE OF RENTING A HOME DECREASES OVER THE GIVEN TIME. IT CAN BE CLEARLY SEEN THAT, IN THE FORMER YEAR, THE PERCENT OF ONWING A HUT IS MERELY ABOVE 20% AND RENTED HUTS IS AROUND ONE FOURTH. RENTED LIVING FACED A DECLINE TO NEAR 68% IN SECOND SPAN WHEREAS, THE PURCHASING OF HOMES INCLINES BY 10%. IN 1961, THE LEASING ROOF FALLS TO MERELY BELOW 60% AND BUYING ROOF IS INCREASES TO EXACTLY 40% IN SAME PERIOD. THE BAR CHART FURTHER COLLATE THAT, IN NEXT DECADE, THE PERCENTS OF BOTH BUYING AND LEASING IS SIMILAR AT 50%. THEN, THE RENTING PLACES DROPS TILL 2001 AT 30% AND IT RISE BY AROUND 8%. MEANWHILE, THE OWNING OF PLACES EXPERIENCED HIKE TO ONE SEVENTH IN 1991 AND REMAINED THE SAME FOR 10 YEARS. THEN, IT SLIPS TO APPROXIMATELY 63%.
THE BAR CHART ILLUSTRATES THE NUMBER OF HOUSEHOLD IN ENGLAND WITH
ACCOOMMODATION
RENTED AND
OWNED
FROM 1918 TO 2011. THE UNITS
ARE MEASURED
IN PERCENTAGE.

OVERALL
, THE TRENDS FOR OWNING A
HOUSE
INCLINED
DRASTICALLY
WHEREAS, THE PERCENTILE OF RENTING A HOME DECREASES OVER THE
GIVEN
TIME.

IT CAN BE
CLEARLY
SEEN
THAT, IN THE FORMER YEAR, THE PERCENT OF
ONWING
A HUT IS
MERELY
ABOVE 20% AND RENTED HUTS IS AROUND ONE FOURTH. RENTED LIVING FACED A DECLINE TO NEAR 68% IN SECOND SPAN WHEREAS, THE PURCHASING OF HOMES INCLINES BY 10%. IN 1961, THE LEASING ROOF FALLS TO
MERELY
BELOW 60% AND BUYING ROOF IS INCREASES TO EXACTLY 40% IN SAME PERIOD.

THE BAR CHART
FURTHER
COLLATE THAT, IN
NEXT
DECADE, THE PERCENTS OF BOTH BUYING AND LEASING IS SIMILAR AT 50%. THEN, THE RENTING PLACES DROPS TILL 2001 AT 30% AND IT RISE BY AROUND 8%. MEANWHILE, THE OWNING OF PLACES EXPERIENCED HIKE TO ONE SEVENTH IN 1991 AND REMAINED THE SAME FOR 10 YEARS. THEN, IT SLIPS TO APPROXIMATELY 63%.
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