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The diagram below show the ethanol fuel from corn.

The diagram below show the ethanol fuel from corn. VY6pK

The schematic- representation illustates the how ethanol fuel is produced made from the corn. Moreover, it is done into 8 steps. To begin with, people produce and receive corn. After that, it is stored and milled. Moreover, it is also cooked and takes time 4 hours, while water is added into this. In addition, human fermented the product aand it takes time nearly 2 days. Whereas, the fermented product is separate into two various forms. They are liquid and solid by product. Subsequently, the liquid product is purified into alcoholic form and it takes a time about 4-5 hours. At the penultimate stage, the obtained product is stored again. Finally, the ethanol fuel is transported and use for industrial purpose. All in all, the technique is complete in plethora of stages. In contrast, it is time-consuming. However, in these method no need of equipment that is why it is labarious.

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