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The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981. N2Oq
The table gives information about how much percent of babies have borned by women aged 40-44 in Australia for 4 different years. Overall, it is noticable that none or only and two children birth rate was declined, whereas the opposite pattern could be observed in three or more than four children's figure for to be born, untill the year 1981. Turning to the details, women l, who has aged from 40-44, have approximately two children (reaching the highest amd popular level with having kids) 38. 3% in 1981. As for the none or one child birth rate in Australia, numbers represented relatively small amount also decreased vasticly 5. 9 and 8. 5 in 2006 and 1981 respectively. However, most 40-44 aged women, who are Australian, wanted to having 3or4 children in that age. Moreover, in 2006, level for having children was about just over a fifth, but this number rose dromaticly in the year 1981 by about 10%. Similarly, four or more children have been less borned by 40-44 aged women as numbers was only about a tenth. Nevertheless, this figure increased significantly to about just over a quarter in the end of given period.
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women
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aged
40-44 in Australia for 4
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different
years.
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, it is
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noticable
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only
and two
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children
birth rate
was declined
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be observed
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be born
,
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,
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women
l, who has
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aged
from 40-44, have approximately two
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children
(reaching the highest
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popular level with having kids) 38. 3% in 1981. As for the none or one child birth rate in Australia, numbers represented
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5. 9 and 8. 5 in 2006 and 1981
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aged
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women
, who are Australian, wanted to
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3or4
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children
in that age.
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, in 2006, level for having
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children
was about
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over a fifth,
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dromaticly
in the year 1981 by about 10%.
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women
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IELTS academic The table below presents the number of children ever born to women aged 40-44 years in Australia for each year the information was collected since 1981.

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