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The maps below show the Happy Valley Shopping Center in 1982 and 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the Happy Valley Shopping Center in 1982 and 2012. N2QW
Two maps illustrate the development of Happy Valley Shopping Center between 2 periods in 1982 and 2012. Overall, it can be seen that, area of Shopping center is enlarged and aditionally, the parking space for car car is added. The first notiable difference between maps is the relocation of sports store, electronic store and food store. In 1982 version of map the sport store and electronic store located in the northen-east corner of Shopping center, whereas they have been moved into the north-west side of it. Also, food store situated upper side of the center zone and the side of it has been changed to beside to the elevator which is located in the bottom side of Shopping Center. By 2012, the indoor shopping area spread to the west and the outdoor lake replaced by furniture retail. Additionly, considerable difference were made were made to the the north west side where is the coffee shop removed. The lobby area in front of the main entrance removed, whreas the entrance was kept in the same location
Two maps illustrate the development of Happy Valley
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Shopping
Center between 2 periods in 1982 and 2012.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that, area of
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Shopping
center
is enlarged
and
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aditionally
, the parking space for
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car car
is
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added
.

The
first
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notiable
difference between maps is the relocation of sports
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store
, electronic
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store
and food
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store
. In 1982 version of map the sport
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store
and electronic
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store
located in the
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northen-east
corner of
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Shopping
center, whereas they have been
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moved
into the north-west side of it.
Also
, food
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store
situated upper side of the center zone and the side of it has been
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changed
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to beside to
the elevator which
is located
in the bottom side of
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Shopping
Center. By 2012, the indoor
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shopping
area spread to the west and the outdoor lake replaced by furniture retail.
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Additionly
, considerable difference
were made
were made
to
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north west
side where is the coffee shop removed. The lobby area in front of the main entrance removed,
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whreas
the entrance was
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kept
in the same
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location
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IELTS academic The maps below show the Happy Valley Shopping Center in 1982 and 2012.

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3 paragraphs
174 words
6.0
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