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The graph below shows the percentage of men and women teachers in six different types of educational setting in the UK in 2010.

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The column graph illustrates the percentage ratio of gender of teachers in six different kinds of education organizations in Great Britain in 2010. Observing the details, the percentage rate for women in nursery sector and primary sector was higher than men. Around more than 90% and less than 90% women participated to educate in this both institutions respectively; whereas, only 1% and 5% men observed in this sectors. However, about 70% men participated to educate in university; while, only 30% females noted in this organization. For college, the percentage rate was equaled for both gender and accounted for 50%. Furthermore, the number of males was slightly less by 44% in secondary school than females around 46%. By contrast, this figure increased slightly for men in private training center than women. Approximately, 40% and 44% men and women dominated in this institution. Overall, the rate of percentage for male was higher in university than female; while, this figure for men was negligible in primary schools and nursery institutions as compared with women in the UK in 2010.
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dominated in this institution.

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for male was higher in university than female; while, this figure for
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was negligible in primary schools and nursery institutions as compared with
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in the UK in 2010.
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