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The bar graph shows the number of attendees at Grandville Stadium, focusing on theater, sports, and music events in the year 2017. The chart makes attendance projections for the years 2020 and 2030 after a major renovation project.

The bar graph shows the number of attendees at Grandville Stadium, focusing on theater, sports, and music events in the year 2017. The chart makes attendance projections for the years 2020 and 2030 after a major renovation project. b8Bl
The bar chart gives information about the number of Grandville Stadium audiences in various events, prior to and after renovation over two decades. It can be seen that conducting sporting events in this stadium attracted the greatest attendee even before the construction project in 2019. It is estimated that the figures of sports events will continue to climb constantly in 2030 with over 150, 000 attendees. This number of attendees is also the peak point among other events between 2017 and 2030. The second greatest attendee came from concerts which the numbers are likely to pass 100, 000 in 2030. Although, the numbers were not even touching 50, 000 attendees during the period 2017 to 2020. Theatre events had the lowest numbers compared to concert and sporting events with fewer than 50, 000 for the next projected years in 2030 as the highest point over two decades. By 2030, all audience figures are predicted as the greatest year than 2017 and 2019 regardless of the event type. In 2017, the attendance of theatre events and concerts had a narrow gap with both numbers approximately around 20, 000. However, sporting events could make to nearly 150, 000 in the same year. There was only a bit increase for theatre events and concerts right after the improvement project in 2019, even though the numbers were still as low as in 2017. The exception was only for sporting events that succeed to add over 150, 000 attendees in 2019.
The bar chart gives information about the
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Grandville
Stadium audiences in various
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events
, prior to and after renovation
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over
two decades. It can be
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seen
that conducting sporting
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events
in this stadium attracted the greatest
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attendee
even
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before
the construction project in 2019.

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is estimated
that the figures of sports
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events
will continue to climb
constantly
in 2030 with
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over
150, 000
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attendees
. This
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number
of
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attendees
is
also
the peak point among other
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events
between 2017 and 2030. The second greatest
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attendee
came from
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concerts
which the
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numbers
are likely to pass 100, 000 in 2030. Although, the
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numbers
were not even touching 50, 000
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attendees
during the period 2017 to 2020.
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Theatre
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events
had the lowest
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numbers
compared to
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concert
and sporting
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events
with fewer than 50, 000 for the
next
projected years in 2030 as the highest point
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over
two decades.

By 2030, all audience figures
are predicted
as the greatest year than 2017 and 2019 regardless of the
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event
type. In 2017, the attendance of
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theatre
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events
and
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concerts
had a narrow gap with both
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approximately around 20, 000.
However
, sporting
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could
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theatre
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and
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concerts
right after the improvement project in 2019,
even though
the
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were
still
as low as in 2017. The exception was
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that succeed to
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add
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over
150, 000
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attendees
in 2019.
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IELTS academic The bar graph shows the number of attendees at Grandville Stadium, focusing on theater, sports, and music events in the year 2017. The chart makes attendance projections for the years 2020 and 2030 after a major renovation project.

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