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The table below presents information about the Australian economy in the late 1980s. Write a report describing the trend in profits shown in the tabel

The table below presents information about the Australian economy in the late 1980s. Write a report describing the trend in profits shown in the tabel OyEop
The rendered chart depicts the information in the five different years about the economy og Australia. The given data is calibrated in $ millions. To commence with, it is crystal clear fron table that in 1986-97 the profit of company on manufacturing was 4650 while on mining it was only 3840. On the contrary, in 1987-88, 6615 profit of industry was on manufacturing and 3826 on mining. Moreover, in 1988-89, on manufacturing and mining it was 8617 and 3540 respectively while profit was 7810 and 4992 on manufacturing and mining in 1989-90. Apart from this, the profit before tax by company on retail trade was 612 in 1986-87 while on other it was 1232. In 1987-88 it was 887 on retail trade and 1511 on other. In addition, on reatil trade and other the profit was 1349 and 1696 in 1988-89 respectively. The profit was 1373 on retail trade and 397 on other in 1989-90. Overall, the profit on manufacturing and other was greater in 1988-89 whereas on mining and retail trade was highest in 1989-90.
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it was 8617 and 3540
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was 7810 and 4992 on
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mining
in 1989-90. Apart from this, the
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retail
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was 612 in 1986-87 while on
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was 1349 and 1696 in 1988-89
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and 397 on
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was greater in 1988-89 whereas on
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was highest in 1989-90.
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IELTS academic The table below presents information about the Australian economy in the late 1980s. Write a report describing the trend in profits shown in the tabel

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