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The three pie charts illustrates, how much fund UK spent on different running costs in three separate years 1981,1991 and 2001

The three pie charts illustrates, how much fund UK spent on different running costs in three separate years 1981, 1991 and 2001 AgaKn

The three pie charts illustrate, how much fund the UK spent on different running costs in three separate years 1981, 1991and 2001. In general, there are two trends: upward and downwards. In all three years, the greatest expenditure was on Teachers’ salaries, the least cost was Insurance. In 1981, teachers’ pay remained the biggest cost (40%) then it is increasing 50% of total spending in 1991. Expenditures on other workers’ salaries at 28% and Resources such as books 15% in 1981, both gradually fall to 22% and 20% respectively in 1991. At the same time costs of the furniture, equipment, and Insurance dramatically increased following to 3% and 23%. Resources and Furniture & equipment were spent equal proportions by 15% in 1981, the former was slightly rose by 5% however the latter has dropped to 5% in 1991. There was significant growth in Furniture and equipment from 5% in 1991 to 23% in 2001. Similarly, the cost of insurance saw a small rise from only 2% to 8 % by 2001. Whereas the other three expenditures decreased, compared the period of 1991 to 2001. Overall, Teachers’ salaries consulted the largest cost to the school, and while spending increased dramatically on equipment and insurance, there were corresponding drops in expenditure and other workers’ salaries.

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expenditure
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salaries
, the least You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
cost
 was Insurance.

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In
 1981, teachers’ pay remained the biggest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
cost
 (40%) then it is increasing 50% of total spending in 1991. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
Expenditures
 on other workers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 at 28% and Resources such as books 15% in 1981, both gradually
 fall to 22% and 20% respectively
 in 1991.

At the same time You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
costs
 of the furniture, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
, and Insurance dramatically
 increased following to 3% and 23%. Resources and Furniture & You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
were spent
 equal proportions by 15% in 1981, the former was slightly
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rose
 by 5% however
 the latter has dropped to 5% in 1991.

There was significant growth in Furniture and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
 from 5% in 1991 to 23% in 2001. Similarly
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
cost
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small
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only
 2% to 8 % by 2001. Whereas the other three You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditures
 decreased, compared the period of 1991 to 2001.

Overall
, Teachers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
 consulted the largest You use this word too often, consider replacing it withworthoutlayfigureprice tagpricerate
cost
 to the school, and while spending increased dramatically
 on You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfurnishingsmaterialmachineryapparatusfurniture
equipment
 and insurance, there were corresponding drops in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdisbursementoutlayfigureconsumptionpricerate
expenditure
 and other workers’ You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagefeepaystipendearningsincome
salaries
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