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The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012

The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012 d2Ed
The supplied table represents the information about how many passengers visite three different German airports, exactly Dusseldorf, Frankfurt, Berlin Tegel from 2007 to 2012. Overall, the number of travellers in all three airport increased. Frankfurt airport touched the peak and number of visitors dramatically rose, while Berlin Tugel airport climbed gradually. Dusseldorf had the periodic fluctuations. As is presented in the table, Dusseldorf’s number of passengers started with a figure 27. 2 in 2007 and this index moderately rose and this airport reached the first apex, with a number 48. 2. Unforunately, next two years this number sharply declined and finally there was tediously increase. Now, turning to the details of Frankfurt airport, it began with a index of 36. 5 at the beginning and it significantly grow and touched the highest point within a time span of five years. However, last airport, namely Berlin Tegel started at the lowest point that others with a 17. 3 in 2009, it presented progressively growth and provided a 43. 3 number in 2009
The supplied table represents the information about how
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many
passengers
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visite
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different
German
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airports
, exactly
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Dusseldorf
, Frankfurt, Berlin
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Tegel
from 2007 to 2012.

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, the
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number
of
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travellers
in all three
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airport
increased. Frankfurt
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airport
touched the peak and
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number
of visitors
dramatically
rose, while Berlin
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Tugel
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airport
climbed
gradually
.
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Dusseldorf
had the periodic fluctuations.

As
is presented
in the table,
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Dusseldorf
’s
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of passengers
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started
with a figure 27. 2 in 2007 and this index
moderately
rose and this
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airport
reached the
first
apex, with a
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number
48. 2.
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Unforunately
,
next
two years this
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number
sharply
declined and
finally
there was
tediously
increase.

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Now
, turning to the
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details
of Frankfurt
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airport
, it began with
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a
index of 36. 5 at the beginning and it
significantly
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grow
and touched the highest point within a time span of five years.
However
, last
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,
namely
Berlin
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Tegel
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started
at the lowest point that others with a 17. 3 in 2009, it presented
progressively
growth and provided a 43. 3
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in 2009
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IELTS academic The table below highlights data on the number of travellers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012

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