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The given table state the information about population of Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and and 2002.

The given table state the information about population of Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and and 2002. eNLJ

the given table chart illustrates the information about population of Australia and Malaysia in 1980 and 2002. the population is divided into five parts overview, the population of Australia in the both year was same and viva versa with opposite gender. In the case of Malaysia the population was increased however female population was increased The population of both genders are 14. 7 and 19. 6 million 1980 and 2002 respectively. In both yah 1980and 2000 the population of male and female was same. In the case of male, it was 99. 9 million and opposite of populace war 50. 1 million the birth rate was declined in Australia 1. 5 to 3. 5 % of the population are above is 55 are so inclined with time period it was increased 2. 8 %. In Malaysia, the total population are increased near about double time it was 3. 7 in 1980 and after 22 year it was 24. 3 million. Male population increased with the smaller margin, however in the case of female it was decline 0. 3 % percentage. The birth rate of the Malaysia population also declined with one percantage. Only one part of inhabitants are increased that pass was over the age 55 it was increased near about 0. 6 %

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