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The maps below show thr villagr of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010

The maps below show thr villagr of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010 8w95
The two maps explains about the stokeford village over thr eighty-year period from 1930 to 2010. Overall, therefore there are lot of changes in houses and in contrast post office and bridge remains constant. In 1930, To the north there was a bridge upon the riverstoke and there was a from north to south. The west side of the road contains post offic4, shops and houses. On the south-west farmland is located. To the east of the farmland a large house have been constructed with large area of gardens. On the top of it primary school have been build with some houses around. To the north-east farmland was situated. In 2010, Farmland was replaced with houses. Moreover, shops are demolished and houses were constructed. Primary school school was extended and top of the school farmland was replaced with houses. The large house was extended and named as retirement home. To the west of home gardens were replaced with houses.
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a large
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IELTS academic The maps below show thr villagr of stokeford in 1930 and in 2010

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