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The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years bgNW
The two pie charts illustrate various types of energies are produced in France from 1995 to 2005. Overall, the energy production from petrol decreased as opposed to gas, coal, nuclear and other section at the same time. In all types of energy production, there was only minimal change over the 10 years period. As can be seen from the chart, the proportion of petrol production dropped dramatically from 29. 27% to 19. 55%, while other sections (gas, coal, nuclear and other) saw a different trend. Coal and gas had a slight increase in the percentage of energy (merely 1%) but it accounts for a haft of the pie charts. With regard to the remaining methods of producing energy, other fuel produced energy had the highest percentage of the increase among five kinds of energy production, by 4. 2%. Likewise, in 1995, nuclear energy generated 6. 40%, which rose significantly to 10. 1% in ten years later.
The two pie charts illustrate various types of
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energies
are produced
in France from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, the
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energy
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production
from petrol decreased as opposed to gas, coal, nuclear and
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other
section at the same time. In all types of
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energy
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production
, there was
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only
minimal
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change
over the 10 years period.

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seen
from the chart, the proportion of petrol
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production
dropped
dramatically
from 29. 27% to 19. 55%, while
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other
sections (gas, coal, nuclear and
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other)
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saw
a
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different
trend. Coal and gas had a slight increase in the percentage of
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energy
(
merely
1%)
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but
it accounts for a haft of the pie charts.

With regard to the remaining methods of producing
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energy
,
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other
fuel produced
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energy
had the highest percentage of the increase among five kinds of
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energy
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production
, by 4. 2%.
Likewise
, in 1995, nuclear
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energy
generated 6. 40%, which rose
significantly
to 10. 1% in ten years later.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the comparison of different kinds of energy production of France in two years

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