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The chart bellow show the percentages of water used for different purposes in six areas of world. Summaries the information and make comparison where required.

The chart bellow show the percentages of water used for different purposes in six areas of world. V183
Central Asia used a major portion of their water for agricultural (88%), Followed by Southeast Asia & Africa (81% and 84% respectively). South America used 71% of their water for agriculture, while Europe and North America used a very small amount of water for agriculture 32% & 39% to be exact. Europe spent a huge portion of its water on industrial use 53% which is highest among all other areas of the world. North America came 2nd in the list with 48%, Followed by Southeast Asia and Africa 12 and 7% respectively. Central Asia used only 5% of its water for industrial use. South America used 19% of their water for domestic use and came first in this category of water use. After South America, Europe, and North America used 15 and 13% of their water for domestic use. Africa uses only 9% of their water for domestic use, While Central Asia and Southeast Asia used almost the same percentage of water for domestic use. Overall it is clear that Central Asia used a major portion of their water for agricultural purposes, while on the other hand Europe, South and North America used their major portion of water for industrial use.
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