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The table below gives the information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

The table below gives the information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002 pRXny
The given table compares the percentage expenditure on consumer goods by the population of five various countries for the year 2002. Overall, it is observed that while the maximum amount was spent on the commodities like food, drinks, tobacco, only a meager spending was seen on leisure and education. The trend remained static for all the five countries. Among the five given countries, the expenditure on food and beverages was the highest for Turkey, a little over quarter and this was closely followed by Ireland in the same department; meanwhile the least was spent by Sweden. It is also deduced from the information provided that countries like Spain and Ireland spent a minimal amount of about 2 percent on studies and recreational activities. This was seen to be consistent in all the other countries as well, the majority being spent by Turkey which was approximately 5 percent
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table compares the percentage expenditure on consumer
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goods
by the population of five various
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countries
for the year 2002.

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is observed
that while the maximum amount was
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spent
on the commodities like food, drinks, tobacco,
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only
a meager spending was
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seen
on leisure and education. The trend remained static for all the five countries.

Among the five
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, the expenditure on food and beverages was the highest for Turkey, a
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over quarter and this was
closely
followed by Ireland in the same department; meanwhile the least was
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by Sweden.

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also
deduced from the information provided that
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countries
like Spain and Ireland
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spent
a minimal amount of about 2 percent on studies and recreational activities. This was
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seen
to be consistent in all the other
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countries
as well
, the majority being
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spent
by Turkey which was approximately 5
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IELTS academic The table below gives the information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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