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The bar and pie chart illustrate average number of hours spent by worker at work and people suffering from illness according by occupations. Overall,The most of the hours spent in work by business men, writers and doctors. Whereas, chef, lecturers and lawyers spent less hours in the work place. To begin with, writers and doctors spent around 45 and 50 hours respectively. Whereas, writers and doctors suffering from stress is 5%and 15%. chef sent 30 hours per week on work.however, lecturers spent almost 4 hours less time in talking lectures per week and suffering from illness percentage is 10 and 25. Movie producer spent 50 hours per week at work.while, business men spent 10 hours more at work and suffering from stress is 18% and 11% respectively. Although, programmer spent 40 working hours in a week on work faced 5% stress related illness

The bar and pie chart illustrate average number of hours spent by worker at work and people suffering from illness according by occupations. Overall, The most of the hours spent in work by business men, writers and doctors. Whereas, chef, lecturers and lawyers spent less hours in the work place. To begin with, writers and doctors spent around 45 and 50 hours respectively. Whereas, writers and doctors suffering from stress is 5%and 15%. chef sent 30 hours per week on work. however, lecturers spent almost 4 hours less time in talking lectures per week and suffering from illness percentage is 10 and 25. Movie producer spent 50 hours per week at work. while, business men spent 10 hours more at work and suffering from stress is 18% and 11% respectively. Although, programmer spent 40 working hours in a week on work faced 5% stress related illness AjPGl
The bar and pie chart illustrate average number of hours spent by worker at work and people suffering from illness according by occupations. Overall, The most of the hours spent in work by business men, writers and doctors. Whereas, chef, lecturers and lawyers spent less hours in the work place. To begin with, writers and doctors spent around 45 and 50 hours respectively. Whereas, writers and doctors suffering from stress is 5%and 15%. chef sent 30 hours per week on work. however, lecturers spent almost 4 hours less time in talking lectures per week and suffering from illness percentage is 10 and 25. Movie producer spent 50 hours per week at work. while, business men spent 10 hours more at work and suffering from stress is 18% and 11% respectively. Although, programmer spent 40 working hours in a week on work faced 5% stress related illness
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IELTS academic The bar and pie chart illustrate average number of hours spent by worker at work and people suffering from illness according by occupations. Overall, The most of the hours spent in work by business men, writers and doctors. Whereas, chef, lecturers and lawyers spent less hours in the work place. To begin with, writers and doctors spent around 45 and 50 hours respectively. Whereas, writers and doctors suffering from stress is 5%and 15%. chef sent 30 hours per week on work. however, lecturers spent almost 4 hours less time in talking lectures per week and suffering from illness percentage is 10 and 25. Movie producer spent 50 hours per week at work. while, business men spent 10 hours more at work and suffering from stress is 18% and 11% respectively. Although, programmer spent 40 working hours in a week on work faced 5% stress related illness

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