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The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008 jR9L1

The provided diagram compares the percent of people who consume five parts of fruit and vegetable every day in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008As is presented, in this period women's rate was the highest percentage. Moreover, point of men was less lower than women while figure of children increased gradually Percent of female climbed remarkably and grew over 30% in 2006, then showed a few variation. Besides, male's rate improved noticeably and swelled above 25% also in 2006, later remained relatively unchanged. In this period, children’s point experienced a period of stability till 2004, but later recovered to 25%.

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people
 who consume five parts of fruit and vegetable every day in the United Kingdom between 2001 and 2008As is presented
, in this period women's rate was the highest percentage. Moreover
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men
 was Non-standard use of the comparative or superlative. Did you mean "less low"?less low
less lower
 than women while figure of children increased gradually
 Percent of female climbed remarkably
 and grew over 30% in 2006, then This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratedportrayedindicateddisplayed
showed
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few variation
. Besides
, male's rate This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorated
improved
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 and swelled above 25% also
 in 2006, later remained relatively
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 later recovered to 25%. 

IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

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