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Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.

Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006. GMr2j
The first chart illustrates the percentage of the films screened in the UK and Australia when compared to the other countries for the year 2001 and the second line diagram gives information on the cinema admissions in the UK and Australian movie market between the year 1976 and 2006. Overall, it is observed that a major proportion of films that were featured in both the countries (Australia and the UK) were US films accounting to up to three-quarters share; meanwhile the least were the Australian films in the native industry. In addition to that, there seems to be a steady growth in the cinema admissions for both the countries except for a minor dip seen by the UK market for the year 1985. From the given data, it can be deduced that both the UK and Australian films screening was the highest in the US, accounting to a whopping 80 percent. Both the markets, however, showed a drastic decrease in the number of their respective films screened in countries other than the US, UK, Australia which was a mere 5 percent. It is also seen that the cinema admissions in the markets of the UK and Australia showed a gradual rise over three decades nearly doubling its value, as against the plunge evident in the second half of the first decade showing a dip to 20 percent.
The
first
chart illustrates the percentage of the films screened in the UK and Australia when compared to the other
countries
for the year 2001 and the second line diagram gives information on the cinema admissions in the UK and Australian movie
market
between the year 1976 and 2006.

Overall
, it
is observed
that a major proportion of films that
were featured
in both the
countries
(Australia and the UK)
were
US films accounting to up to three-quarters share; meanwhile the least were the Australian films in the native industry.
In addition
to that, there seems to be a steady growth in the cinema admissions for both the
countries
except for
a minor dip
seen
by the UK
market
for the year 1985.

From the
given
data, it can
be deduced
that both the UK and Australian films screening was the highest in the US, accounting to a whopping 80 percent. Both the markets,
however
,
showed
a drastic decrease in the number of their respective films screened in
countries
other than the US, UK, Australia which was a mere 5 percent.

It is
also
seen
that the cinema admissions in the markets of the UK and Australia
showed
a gradual rise over three decades
nearly
doubling its value, as against the plunge evident in the second half of the
first
decade showing a dip to 20 percent.
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IELTS academic Charts A and B show the share of the UK and Australian cinema market in 2001 and cinema admission in the UK and Australia from 1976 to 2006.

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