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The graph below shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012

The graph below shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012 15V0L

The presented illustration depicts the populace numeral for various species of tortoise in India between 1980 and 2012 According to the graph, Olive Ridley Turtles’s rate increased significantly. Furthermore, Leatherback Tortoises’s point declined substantially whereas figures of All species and Green Turtles remained the same. The number of Olive Ridley Turtles rose from 100 to just under 140 index in 1997 and point fluctuated from that period till 2012. Leatherback Tortoises’s rate climbed from 100 just over 110 in 1987, but later reduced sharply to just under 50 index in 2012. The population of All species grew to 110 point in 1985. Nonetheless, it experienced a period of instability between that year and 2012. Green Turtles’s figure escalated from 100 index to just under 110 and it also experienced a period of volatility from that year to 2012.

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IELTS academic The graph below shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012

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