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The chart below shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012

The chart below shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012 Kw0QR
The given illustration depicts the population figures for various species of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012 As can be seen from the graph that the highest rate is all species increased noticeably the lowest rate is leatherback turtles dramatically drop however Green Turtles and Olive Ridley turtles relatively changed The number of Olive Ridley turtles started at just below thousand in 1980 and suddenly rose between 1996 and 1998. But later changed dramatically again in 2002. That rise and fall erratically. From 1980 to 2008 the number of Leatherback turtles rapidly decline and in 2010 slowly improve. Green turtles figure from 100 index between 1998 and 2012 experience a period of instability.
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in India from 1980 to 2012

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noticeably
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leatherback
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dramatically
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Turtles
and Olive
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Ridley
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changed


The number of Olive
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turtles
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below thousand in 1980 and
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later
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changed
dramatically
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From 1980 to 2008 the number of
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Leatherback
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turtles
rapidly
decline and in 2010
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. Green
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figure from 100
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between 1998 and 2012 experience a period of instability.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the population figures for different types of turtles in India from 1980 to 2012

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