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The table below gives the information of about problems facing by the children in two different schools

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The assigned table graph demonstrate the preparation of youngsters with various kinds of educational difficulties in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015 respectively having a myopic look on the table graph the highest rate of children who face problem in concentration in lesson in 2005 which was observed as 40% whereas the maximum number of boys and girls of issue in handwriting in 2015 which was notice as 28% insta comparison the lowest percentage of young generation of travel in spelling in 2005 while the maximum ratio of new generation of marine handwriting in 2010 which was about 7% turning to the rest of the trails are resemblance of 35% can be witnessed in the preparation of youngsters in the problem of listening skills and verbal expression of ideas in 2005 the difference of 3% can be seen in the ratio of students of difficulty in consideration and following instructions overall most of the problems was facing student was the incline trend
The assigned table graph demonstrate the preparation of youngsters with various kinds of educational difficulties in two primary schools in 2005 and 2015
respectively
having a myopic look on the table graph the highest rate of children who face problem in concentration in lesson in 2005 which
was observed
as 40% whereas the maximum number of boys and girls of issue in handwriting in 2015 which was notice as 28%
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comparison the lowest percentage of young generation of travel in spelling in 2005 while the maximum ratio of new generation of marine handwriting in 2010 which was about 7% turning to the rest of the trails are resemblance of 35% can
be witnessed
in the preparation of youngsters in the problem of listening
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skills
and verbal expression of
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ideas
in 2005 the difference of 3% can be
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seen
in the ratio of students of difficulty in consideration and following instructions
overall
most of the problems was facing student was the incline trend
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6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 7.0
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