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The chart below indicates the number of vehicles sold each month of the second half of 2008 in lotus company

The chart below indicates the number of vehicles sold each month of the second half of 2008 in lotus company 06LGn
The column chart shows the number and of the two types of vehicles sold in each month from july to December in Lotus Company in 2008. The most successful and worst sales of cars happened in September (230) and October (55) respectively, while those of trucks fell in November (110) and July (80) respectively. September was the only month in which over 300 vehicles were sold, 230 cars and 100 trucks. This month was, in descending order of sales, followed by November, December, July, August and October. October was the worst month of sales in the second half of the year with only 145 vehicles sold, 185 less than SepSeptember. It is the only month in which the number of sold vehicles was under 150. In August the sales of the two types of vehicles were very close to each other with 90 cars and 98 trucks. Although the sales of both kinds of vehicles fluctuated, we don’t seem to find any correlation between the sales of cars and trucks.
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Company
in 2008.

The most successful and worst
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sales
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cars
happened in September (230) and October (55)
respectively
, while those of trucks fell in November (110) and July (80)
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.

September was the
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in which over 300
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, 230
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cars
and 100 trucks. This
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was, in descending order of
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sales
, followed by November, December, July, August and October.

October was the worst
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of
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sales
in the second half of the year with
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145
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sold, 185 less than
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in which the number of sold
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was under 150.

In August the
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of the two types of
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were
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close to each other with 90
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and 98 trucks.

Although the
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of both kinds of
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fluctuated, we don’t seem to find any correlation between the
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and trucks.
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IELTS academic The chart below indicates the number of vehicles sold each month of the second half of 2008 in lotus company

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