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The graph shows the amount of money spent on books

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The given line graph illustrates how much money was spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria starting from 1995 till 2005. Overall, spending money on books slightly changed in France, Germany and Italy, while popularity of books in Austria increased sharply throughout a decade. To begin, in 1995 the amount of money spent on books in Germany began by merely 80 million dollars and gradually rose till 2003. Meanwhile, it experienced a slow fall between 1999 and 2003 and then went on to increase for the rest of the period. In contrast, in Austria paying out for books dramatically increased by 2. 5 times to 75 million dollars. By the end of the second millennium, Italians bought books for 50 million dollars. Consequently, over five year this number climbed by just over one fifth. However, during this period, in France money spent on books had a growth of a little less than half. 154 words
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slightly
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in France, Germany and Italy, while popularity of
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in Austria increased
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throughout a decade.

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, in 1995 the amount of
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spent on
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in Germany began by
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80 million dollars and
gradually
rose till 2003. Meanwhile, it experienced a slow fall between 1999 and 2003 and then went on to increase for the rest of the period.
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, in Austria paying out for
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books
dramatically
increased by 2. 5 times to 75 million dollars. By the
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end
of the second millennium, Italians
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bought
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for 50 million dollars.
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, over five year this number climbed by
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over one fifth.
However
, during this period, in France
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spent on
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had a growth of a
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less than half.

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