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Topic Eat out and eat at home

Topic Eat out and eat at home RyrLM
some people like to eat at home and some people like to eat out at a restaurant. In this case, I prefer to eat at home. Advantages of eating at home: the home food is very delicious. you can feel comfortable. we also help the mother to ready the delicious food. we can make jokes with our family members. we are in the problem you discuss with your family members. your mother ask what do you do in school. I do my classwork, and read the next lessons, and play and art. Advantages of eating out: we are so much excited to go to the restaurant. we order pizza, burgers, chicken pieces and stuff like that. we cannot wash dishes. we cannot clean the table. if you go to their friends you can also enjoy everything. i like to eat at home.
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people
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eat
at home and
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some
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people
like to
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eat
out at a restaurant.
In this case
, I prefer to
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eat
at home. Advantages of eating at home: the home food is
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very
delicious.
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you
can feel comfortable.
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we
also
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help
the mother to ready the delicious food.
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we
can
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make
jokes with our family members.
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we
are in the problem you discuss with your family members.
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your
mother ask what do you do in school. I do my classwork, and read the
next
lessons, and play and art. Advantages of eating out: we are
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so
much excited to go to the restaurant.
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we
order pizza, burgers, chicken pieces and stuff like that.
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we
cannot wash dishes.
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we
cannot clean the table.
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if
you go to their friends you can
also
enjoy everything.
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i
like to
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at home.
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IELTS academic Topic Eat out and eat at home

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
142 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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