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The table below gives the information about population of over 60-yearolds in regions in 2000,and the predicted numbers of population over 60 in 2050.it also show the world population over 60 in 2000and 2050.

The table below gives the information about population of over 60-yearolds in regions in 2000, and the predicted numbers of population over 60 in 2050. it also show the world population over 60 in 2000and 2050. M0VN
The rendered tabular chart depicts the infromation about how the populace of senior citizen vary in different parts of world from the year 2000 to the year 2050. The data is calibirated into percentum. At the fleeting glance, it is Crystal clear that in 2000, the highest proportion of oldsters was witnessed in the Europe which was 22%. This was followed by whole world which accounted for 13%. As saw in case of North America and the Oceania both countries had the same number of old people to 11%. Whereas, Aferica registered as the least count of senior citizens and the figure was observed to be 5%. In 2050, on the other hand, Europe will show the maximum percentage of oldest people wich is surveyed to be 31%. The second highest proportion will be observed in Asia. which will accounted for 28%. Meanwhile, Africa will show the lowest citizenry of elderly persons that will registered to12%. From an overall analysis, it is vivid, Europe showed large percentum of senior citizen in past as well as in future while Africa have lowest population of over 60-yearsolds persons.
The rendered tabular chart depicts the
infromation
about how the populace of senior citizen vary in
different
parts of world from the year 2000 to the year 2050. The data is
calibirated
into
percentum
.

At the fleeting glance, it is Crystal
clear
that in 2000, the highest proportion of oldsters
was witnessed
in the Europe which was 22%. This
was followed
by whole world which accounted for 13%. As
saw
in case of North America and the Oceania both countries had the same number of
old
people
to 11%. Whereas,
Aferica
registered as the least count of senior citizens and the figure
was observed
to be 5%.

In 2050,
on the other hand
, Europe will
show
the maximum percentage of
oldest
people
wich
is surveyed
to be 31%. The second highest proportion will
be observed
in Asia.
which
will accounted for 28%. Meanwhile, Africa will
show
the lowest citizenry of elderly persons that will registered to12%.

From an
overall
analysis, it is vivid, Europe
showed
large
percentum
of senior citizen in past
as well
as in future while Africa have
lowest
population of over 60-yearsolds persons.
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IELTS academic The table below gives the information about population of over 60-yearolds in regions in 2000, and the predicted numbers of population over 60 in 2050. it also show the world population over 60 in 2000and 2050.

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