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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table compares the percentage of expenditure spend by consumers on different living expenses in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and turkey in 2002. Overall, it is clear that the highest volume was spent on food, drinks, and tobacco, and the lowest amount spent on leisure and education. However, the ratio was the greatest in Turkey in all three categories. In terms of food, drinks, and tobacco, the ratio consumed the most in Turkey with 32. 14% followed by Ireland with 28. 91%; it was half in Spain as compared to turkey with 18. 80%, and at last 16. 36% and 15. 77% in Italy and Sweden respectively. While, in leisure and education, the ratios were far lowest, the highest was 4. 35% which was of turkey, the ratio for Italy and Sweden was far close to each other with 3. 20% and 3. 22%. in Ireland, 2. 21% followed by 1. 98% in Spain. With regard to clothing and footwear, the percentage for Italy was the greatest and contributed to 9. 00%. And, the ratio for Turkey, Spain, and Ireland was relatively similar accounted for 6. 63% followed by 6. 51%, and finally 6. 43% sequentially. In Sweden, it was 5. 40%.
The table compares the percentage of expenditure spend by consumers on
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living expenses in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and turkey in 2002.

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that the highest volume
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on food, drinks, and tobacco, and the lowest amount spent on leisure and education.
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was the greatest in Turkey in all three categories.

In terms of food, drinks, and tobacco, the
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consumed the most in Turkey with 32. 14% followed by Ireland with 28. 91%; it was half in Spain as compared to
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with 18. 80%, and at last 16. 36% and 15. 77% in Italy and Sweden
respectively
. While, in leisure and education, the
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were far lowest, the highest was 4. 35% which was of
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turkey
, the
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for Italy and Sweden was far close to each other with 3. 20% and 3. 22%.
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Ireland, 2. 21% followed by 1. 98% in Spain.

With regard to clothing and footwear, the percentage for Italy was the greatest and contributed to 9. 00%. And, the
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for Turkey, Spain, and Ireland was
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similar accounted for 6. 63% followed by 6. 51%, and
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sequentially
. In Sweden, it was 5. 40%.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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