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The graph below contains information about carbon dioxide emission in East and West between 1988 and 2006

The graph illustrates carbon dioxide emissions in West and East, measured in million of tons of carbon from 1988 to 2006 in 3 yearly intervals. Overall, there was a significant increase in the quantity of emission in both areas over the eighteen years. If we look at details, the largest quantity emission both in 1988 and 2006 was in West (4000 and about 4800 million of tons, respectively), while the lowest both in the same time was in East (about 1900 and 4000 million of tons, respectively). The amount of emission in the fomer area remained relatively stable from 1994 to 2003, rising to almost 4500 million of tons, before growing slightly to a peak of about 4800 million level in the last 3 years of the period. Moreover, in the latter area, after being constant at about 1800 million of tons during first 3 years, there was a fluctuation at 2000 million level. It is also interesting to note that this increased sharply to 4000 million of tons of CO2 over the next 9 years.
The graph illustrates carbon dioxide
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in West and East, measured in
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of tons of carbon from 1988 to 2006 in 3 yearly intervals.

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, there was a significant increase in the quantity of
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emission
in both areas over the eighteen years.

If we look at
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, the largest quantity
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both in 1988 and 2006 was in West (4000 and about 4800
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million
of tons,
respectively
), while the lowest both in the same time was in East (about 1900 and 4000
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million
of tons,
respectively
). The amount of
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in the
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fomer
area remained
relatively
stable from 1994 to 2003, rising to almost 4500
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growing
slightly
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level in the last 3 years of the period.

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, in the latter area, after being constant at about 1800
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of tons during
first
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level. It is
also
interesting to note that this increased
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of tons of CO2 over the
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