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Major components of country's revenue is export earning. It usually varies from year to year. So, we will discuss about percentage change of export in each category from 2015-2016. Petroleum product is country's most making product. Earning in 2016 increased by 3% in comparison to 2015 with the total earning of more than 60 $ billions. The second most profitable category in 2016 is engineered goods which earning increases by 8. 5% total earning 60 $ billions plus which was lower than 60 $ billions in 2015. This also leads to increase in production of engineered goods and create opportunity in jobs in large scale. The value of gems & jewelry decreased to 5. 18% in 2016. It's earning was more than 40 $ billions in 2015 which is less than that in 2016 by 5. 18%. Next category is agricultural product which export earning in 2016 is increased to 0. 18%. Last product is textiles in which there is a improvement by more than 15. 24% in 2016 leading to the profitable category. This concludes that the total export earning in 2016 increased by 21 % in comparison to 2015 which leads to more vacancies & job opportunities in the respective fields which helps to develop company's revenue.

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