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The chart shows the average life expectancy for male and female in 1900, 1950 and 1990.

The table illustrates the meedle lifespan expectetion for both gender in 1900, 1950 and 1990 in Europen countries. In general, it can be seen that the medial number of years populace from 5 variance European nation lived in three different time periods. The table comparies five regions in term of life expectancy variaty European countries in 1900, 1950 and 1990. In the early period all regions lifespan is less similar rather than over the period time. There was a slight increase of age population in Austria country in the next 90 years. However another country a sharper rise age population is very rapid than the Austria regions. As the table shows Belgium a growth both gender ages started at 37, 8 and 39, 9 in male and female receptively in 1900 years, followed by a significant increase between 1950 and 1990. Subsequently, in Denmark country growth of age nations is different from the rest the current period. However in German and Sweden countries the median lifespan compared with other countries. In two countries shows a steep growth of age population in from 1900 to 1950, which was followed by a sharp rise median lifespan in 1990.
The table illustrates the
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lifespan
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expectetion
for both gender in 1900, 1950 and 1990 in
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Europen
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that the medial number of years populace from 5 variance European nation
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lived
in three
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The table
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comparies
five regions
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life expectancy
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European
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countries
in 1900, 1950 and 1990. In the early period all
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regions
lifespan is less similar
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age
population in Austria
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in the
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90 years.
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a sharper rise
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age
population is
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rapid than the Austria regions.

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Belgium a growth both gender
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ages
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started
at 37, 8 and 39, 9 in male and female
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in 1900 years, followed by a significant increase between 1950 and 1990.

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, in Denmark
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growth of
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nations is
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current
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in German and Sweden
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the median lifespan compared with other
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population in from 1900 to 1950, which
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by a sharp rise median lifespan in 1990.
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IELTS academic The chart shows the average life expectancy for male and female in 1900, 1950 and 1990.

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