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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table compares the percentage of expenditure which consumers from five countries spend on different living expenses. The data is taken from the year 2002. Overall, it is clear that the highest volume was spent on food, drinks, and tobacco, and the lowest amount spent on leisure and education. In terms of turkey, food, drinks, and tobacco consumed the greatest ratio with 32. 14% while the figure of the other two categories was 6. 63% on clothing and footwear and 4. 35% on leisure and education. In Ireland, the largest proportion contributed from food which was 28. 91% whereas it was considerably largest than footwear and education with 6. 43% and 2. 21% respectively. With regard to Spain, tobacco amounted to 18. 80% while 6. 51% on footwear which was far lower than tobacco, and only just 1. 98% on leisure and education. In Italy and Sweden, the ratio spent on drinks and education relatively similar to each other 16. 36% and 15. 77% sequentially on drinks, it doubled on clothing, while 3. 20% and 3. 22% respectively on education.
The table compares the percentage of expenditure which consumers from five countries spend on
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living expenses. The data
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from the year 2002.

Overall
, it is
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clear
that the highest volume
was spent
on food,
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drinks
, and
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tobacco
, and the lowest amount spent on leisure and education.

In terms of
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turkey
, food,
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drinks
, and
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tobacco
consumed the greatest ratio with 32. 14% while the figure of the other two categories was 6. 63% on clothing and footwear and 4. 35% on leisure and
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education
. In Ireland, the largest proportion contributed from food which was 28. 91% whereas it was
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largest than
footwear and
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education
with 6. 43% and 2. 21%
respectively
.

With regard to Spain,
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tobacco
amounted to 18. 80% while 6. 51% on footwear which was far lower than
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tobacco
, and
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only
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just
1. 98% on leisure and
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education
. In Italy and Sweden, the ratio spent on
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drinks
and
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education
relatively
similar to each other 16. 36% and 15. 77%
sequentially
on
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drinks
, it doubled on clothing, while 3. 20% and 3. 22%
respectively
on
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education
.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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