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The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002. DWba
The table shows the proportion of consumer spending on three items in five countries in 2002. Overall, food / drinks /tobacco accounted for the largest consumer spending in the five countries, while the smallest consumer spending was on leisure /education. Looking at the chart in more details, we can see there was 32. 14% of consumer spending on food / drinks /tobacco in Turkey. This figure was the largest among all countries. Ireland had 28. 91% of consumer spending on this category. The other three countries had no more than 20% of consumer spending on this item. As for the second item, clothing /footwear accounted for no more than 10% of the total consumer spending in five countries, varying low of 5. 40%in Sweden to a high of 9. 00% in Italy. In item of the last category, the spending on leisure /education made up no more than 5% of consumer spending in each country. the smallest proportion of consumer spending on leisure /education in Spain, with the figure of 1. 98%. Turkey had the highest figure at 4. 35%.
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the proportion of
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on three items in five
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in 2002.

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in the five
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, while the smallest
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was on leisure /education.

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, we can
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there was 32. 14% of
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on food / drinks /tobacco in Turkey. This figure was the largest among all
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. Ireland had 28. 91% of
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spending
on this category. The other three
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countries
had no more than 20% of
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consumer
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spending
on this item.

As for the second item, clothing /footwear accounted for no more than 10% of the total
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consumer
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spending
in five
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countries
, varying low of 5. 40%in Sweden to a high of 9. 00% in Italy.

In item of the last category, the
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on leisure /education made up no more than 5% of
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in each
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.
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smallest proportion of
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on leisure /education in Spain, with the figure of 1. 98%. Turkey had the highest figure at 4. 35%.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

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