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the table below gives information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000

the table below gives information about the world population and distribution in 1950 and 2000 K0mn1
The tables below shows data about population at six countries in between 1965 and 2000 and also gives projection about 2050. In 1950, world populations were 2. 5 billions which increased to 6 billions in 2000. Projection showed that the number will reach at 9 billions in 2050. Asia became highest among all other countries in population which accounted 56%. It raised up to 60% in 2000. However, oceania had less than 1% of population in the year of 1959, 2000 and projection showed not any different in 2050. Further more, 22% of population accounted at Europe in 1950. It was decreased by the year 2000 and became 12%. Projection showed 7% of population in 2050. In addition, in1950, Latin america and North america had almost same percentages in population. It was 6% and 7% respectively. In the year 2000, the population jumped to 9% and projection said that it will remain same in 2050. Whereas, North america had only 5% of population in 2000 and projection showed 4% of population in 2050. Africa had 9% of population in 1950 and it was increased by 3% in 2000. Projection showed that 20% of population will account in 2050. Overall, Asia accounted more population in all of three years as compared to other countries.
The tables below
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shows
data about
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population
at six countries in between 1965 and 2000 and
also
gives projection about 2050.

In 1950, world
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populations
were 2. 5 billions which increased to 6 billions in 2000. Projection
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showed
that the number will reach at 9 billions in 2050.

Asia became highest among all other countries in
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population
which accounted 56%. It raised up to 60% in 2000.
However
,
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oceania
had less than 1% of
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population
in the
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year
of 1959, 2000 and projection
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showed
not any
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different
in 2050.
Further
more, 22% of
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population
accounted at Europe in 1950. It
was decreased
by the
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year
2000 and became 12%. Projection
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showed
7% of
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population
in 2050.
In addition
, in1950, Latin
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america
and
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North america
had almost same percentages in
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population
. It was 6% and 7%
respectively
. In the
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year
2000, the
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population
jumped to 9% and projection said that it will remain same in 2050. Whereas,
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North america
had
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only
5% of
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population
in 2000 and projection
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showed
4% of
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population
in 2050. Africa had 9% of
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population
in 1950 and it
was increased
by 3% in 2000. Projection
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showed
that 20% of
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population
will account in 2050.

Overall
, Asia accounted more
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population
in all of three years as compared to other countries.
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