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the table below show the three type of crime in England and Wales form 1970 to 2005

the table below show the three type of crime in England and Wales form 1970 to 2005 APxJl
the line graph illustrate the information of three kind of crime car theft, house burglary and street robbery in England and Wales between 1970 to 2005 In 1970, crime of car theft committed was nearly 0. 4 million, while house burglary was around approximately 0. 2 million. the street robbery was under 0 million. over the next 20 years, the crime on car theft was 1 million. while the crime on house burglary increased gradually to over 0. 6. From, 1995, the crime rate of car theft was rized significantly and reached at 1. 6 million. it had been decreased slightly to 1 million. house burglary also decreased and reached 0. 4 million. at last, crime of street robbery was increased 0. 2 million by 2005. Overall, the crime of car theft was highest and the house burglary was followed the car theft. the street robbery level was decreased.
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kind
of
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crime
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car
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theft
,
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house
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burglary
and
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street
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robbery
in England and Wales
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between 1970 to 2005
In 1970,
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crime
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car
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theft
committed was
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0. 4
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million
, while
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house
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burglary
was around approximately 0. 2
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million
.
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the
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street
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robbery
was under 0
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million
.
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over
the
next
20 years, the
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crime
on
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car
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theft
was 1
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million
.
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while
the
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crime
on
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house
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burglary
increased
gradually
to over 0. 6. From, 1995, the
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crime
rate of
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car
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theft
was
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rized
significantly
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million
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it
had
been decreased
slightly
to 1
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million
.
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house
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burglary
also
decreased and reached 0. 4
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million
.
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at
last,
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crime
of
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street
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robbery
was increased
0. 2
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million
by 2005.
Overall
, the
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crime
of
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car
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theft
was highest and the
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house
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burglary
was followed
the
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car
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theft
.
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the
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street
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robbery
level
was decreased
.
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IELTS academic the table below show the three type of crime in England and Wales form 1970 to 2005

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