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The diagram shows the street now and in the past.

The diagram shows the street now and in the past. yGqNM
The diagram illustrates the information about the changes in the infrastructure of two avenues from the past to the present. Overall, it is conclusively obvious that the street is fully environment friendly as well as provides more amenities as compared to the past. Primarily, it is candid that the Foster Road is situated between two sectors, whereas this road also called as four-lane road. In addition, the width of the sideway was less, which is augmented. Moreover, there was much traffic on the roads, whilst no safety signs were there for crossing from 85 Avenue to SE 84 one or vice versa. However, a new crossing lane is installed on the one corner of the street. Furthermore, there was no special place for bicycles, due to this concern, a new bicycles lanes are made on the both sides of the road. Further, in the new plan, a number of tree is installed on the one corner of the sidewalks. Nowadays, the road is two-lane along with a tree in it's middle corner. Ultimately, there is no change in houses, shoes, petrol pumps and electric poles.
The diagram illustrates the information about the
changes
in the infrastructure of two avenues from the past to the present.

Overall
, it is
conclusively
obvious that the street is
fully
environment friendly
as well
as provides more amenities as compared to the past.

Primarily
, it is candid that the Foster
Road
is situated
between two sectors, whereas this
road
also
called as four-lane
road
.
In addition
, the width of the
sideway
was less, which
is augmented
.
Moreover
, there was much traffic on the
roads
, whilst no safety signs were there for crossing from 85 Avenue to SE 84 one or vice versa.
However
, a new crossing lane
is installed
on the one corner of the street.

Furthermore
, there was no special place for bicycles, due to this concern, a new bicycles lanes
are made
on the both sides of the
road
.
Further
, in the new plan, a number of tree
is installed
on the one corner of the sidewalks. Nowadays, the
road
is two-lane along with a tree in
it's
middle corner.
Ultimately
, there is no
change
in
houses
, shoes, petrol pumps and electric poles.
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IELTS academic The diagram shows the street now and in the past.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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