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The two maps illustrate how road reache to a town of hospital over a period of 3 years in the years 2007 and 2010.

The two maps illustrate how road reache to a town of hospital over a period of 3 years in the years 2007 and 2010. 263ao

Overall, it can be seen that there had total three changed over the period shown. However, the most important item had included in 2010 which had the bus station, while the place of bus station had no selected of a town hospital in 2007. In 2007, the position of city hospital had established in the centre area, but it had no any changed over the 3-year period. Moreover, the ring road had another way without changed during the same period of 2007 and 2010. The noticeable point is that the roundbout had added in the centre area of city road and hospital in 2010, which had been removed by 2007. Another key point is that the bus station had constructed in the south west area along with roundabout of hospital in 2010, whereas the bus stop had selected near by hospital road in 2007. Besides, in 2010, the staff car park had created by removing the bus stop in centre. Lastly, there had no exceptional changed of city road to 2010 from 2007.

Overall
, it can be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 that there had total three This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 over the period shown. However
, the most This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 item had included in 2010 which had the bus station, while the place of bus station had no selected of a town You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 in 2007.

In 2007, the position of city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 had established in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 area, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 it had Did you mean "now" (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?now
no
 any This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 over the 3-year period. Moreover
, the ring You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 had another way without This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 during the same period of 2007 and 2010. The noticeable point is that the Possible spelling mistake found.roundaboutround bout
roundbout
 had This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 in the Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 area of city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 in 2010, which had been removed
 by 2007.

Another key point is that the bus station had constructed in the This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.south-westsouthwest
south west
 area along with roundabout of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
 in 2010, whereas the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 had selected Did you mean "nearby"?nearby
near by
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnursing homeclinichospicewardinstitutionemergency room
hospital
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 in 2007. Besides
, in 2010, the staff car park had created by removing the bus This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :terminateceasediscontinue
stop
 in Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
. Lastly
, there had no exceptional This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 of city You use this word too often, consider replacing it withroadwaylaneboulevardthoroughfarecoursetrack
road
 to 2010 from 2007. 