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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The presented table chart illustrate rail under groundsystem in six various clime. Neverthless consider railway opening year and folk, who travel with railway. Also system made london, paris, tokyo, washington, kyoto and los angeles. It is crystal, The japan mortals used highest railway for their work at least 1927 millions per year. Tokyo railway system opened as per pasanger 1927 killometers. Next to London city where underground rail system made in very early since 1863 but their route is very bigger than other five countries, which was least than 400 km. Second number highest consumption of publictransport where was paries. 1191 millions passanger used by underground rail line. that was opend after 27 years by london. And this is coincidence after 27 years made tokyo rail system. However, Kyoto passanger used that system lowerthan all land and their opening system made in 1981. It was spread very short distance which was 11km. In early 21th century made losangles railway underground system and around 50 million passanger used their system. All in all, japan mankind very highest used government transport and kyoto city people small intrested in using of this system.
The presented table chart illustrate
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opening
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year
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Also
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london
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paris
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tokyo
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kyoto
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It is crystal, The japan mortals
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used
highest
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railway
for their work at least 1927 millions per
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. Tokyo
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railway
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opened as per
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pasanger
1927
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killometers
.
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to London city where underground
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made in
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early since 1863
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their route is
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bigger than other five countries, which was least than 400 km. Second number
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consumption of
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publictransport
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paries
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passanger
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tokyo
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, Kyoto
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lowerthan
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made in 1981. It
was spread
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short distance which was
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21th
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losangles
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and around 50 million
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passanger
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used
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All in all,
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japan
mankind
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people
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

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190 words
6.0
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