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The pie chart below show the % of housing owned and rented in the UK in1991 and 2007

The given information is about the proportion of housing hold and lease has been elucidated in the given pie chart in UK in the year 1991 and 2007 figures are shown in million overall it is crystal clear that the home owner in 27 million home was dominated however social housing was on the leastto begin with in 27 million homes the home was on highest in the year 2007 and social housing was renting and social renting had increased by 25 and 25% respectively in the same year. secondly in the year 1991 the home owner was higher whilst, social renting was lower approximately by 25%. In compare to private renting is also lowest in the same year and social housing was on the least in 22 million home by 15%
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1991 the
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IELTS academic The pie chart below show the % of housing owned and rented in the UK in1991 and 2007

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