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The diagram below shows how raw materials are used to make plastic products. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The plastic production process is very complex. This process consists of around five steps and the equipment used in the process are oil truck, high pressure oven, injection moulding machine, conveyer belt. There are four types of workers are used, they are truck drivers, mould collectors, quality check controllers and packers. At the beginning, the raw material is sent to the high pressure oven which is collected from oil refinery through oil truck, then from high pressure oven long molecules of plastic is produced Later these long molecules of plastic enter into plastic granular to make it into a number of granules. After then it is sent to injection moulder which melts plastic and forces it into mould Production At last the mould product are collected by mould collectors. After a while these mould product sent to the conveyer belt where the quality of product is checked by quality check controller. If the product quality is good it is sent to packing process otherwise these product sent to waste. In packing process the packers packs the product and sent it into storage in ware house
The
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plastic
production
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process
is
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very
complex. This
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process
consists of around five steps and the equipment
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used
in the
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process
are oil truck, high pressure oven, injection
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moulding
machine,
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conveyer
belt. There are four types of workers are
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used
, they are truck drivers,
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mould
collectors,
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quality
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check
controllers and packers.

At the beginning, the raw material is
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sent
to the high pressure oven which
is collected
from oil refinery through oil truck, then from high pressure oven long molecules of
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plastic
is produced


Later these long molecules of
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plastic
enter into
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plastic
granular to
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make
it into a number of granules. After
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then it
is
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sent
to injection
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moulder
which melts
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plastic
and forces it into
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mould
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Production


At last the
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mould
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product
are collected
by
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mould
collectors. After a while these
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mould
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product
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sent
to the
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conveyer
belt where the
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quality
of
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product
is
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checked
by
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quality
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check
controller. If the
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product
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quality
is
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good
it is
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sent
to packing
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process
otherwise
these
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product
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sent
to waste. In packing
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the packers packs the
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product
and
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sent
it into storage in ware
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house
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows how raw materials are used to make plastic products.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
184 words
5.5
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