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the chart below shows the changes that took place in three different areas of crime in newpert city centre frrom 2003-20012

The graph represents the variation in levels in three main areas of crime in the centre of Newport city in the time period from 2003-2012. Overall, the rate of burglary declined sharply. The level of robbery remained constant in all year. Moreover, car theft raised and had the biggest number of incidences in 2012. To begin with, it was3400 incidences of burglary in 2003 and 3750 in 2004. Fortunately, in the next 4 years it fell down dramatically and reached the absolute minimum in 2008 (1100 incidences), however, it then grew by 300 accidents and remained fairly constant by 2012. Further more, cars theft was a steady level of crime from 2003 to 2004 and got reduced in next 5 years from 2700 up to 2250. The number then increased to 2700 in 2012. Robbery reached its peak in 2005, which was 900 cases and decreased back to 500 in 2008. In the following two years, the number of incidences rose to 700 and continued to stay at this level in 2012.
The graph represents the variation in
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levels
in three main areas of crime in the
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centre
of Newport city in the time period from 2003-2012.

Overall
, the rate of burglary declined
sharply
. The
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level
of robbery remained constant in all
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year
.
Moreover
, car theft raised and had the biggest number of
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incidences
in 2012.

To
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begin
with, it was3400
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incidences
of burglary in 2003 and 3750 in 2004.
Fortunately
, in the
next
4 years it fell down
dramatically
and reached the absolute minimum in 2008 (1100
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incidences)
,
however
, it then grew by 300 accidents and remained
fairly
constant by 2012.

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, cars theft was a steady
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level
of crime from 2003 to 2004 and
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got
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in
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5 years from 2700 up to 2250. The number then increased to 2700 in 2012.

Robbery reached its peak in 2005, which was 900 cases and decreased back to 500 in 2008. In the following two years, the number of
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incidences
rose to 700 and continued to stay at this
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level
in 2012.
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