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Graph of visitors to carebbean

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The graph illustrates data about how many visitors travelling to a certain Caribbean island over a seven-year period between 2010 and 2017. Overall, what stands out from the graph is that there an upward trends in the number of both visitors whose staying on cruise ships and Island. Another interesting point is that the highest value can be seen in 2017. Looking at the details, as regards the number of visitors staying on cruise ships started at 0. 3 million at 2010, then there is a moderate rise to reach 0. 5 million at 2011. In the following year, there is a weak gradually fall to reach again nearly 0. 5 million. The figure goes up significantly over the next five years finishing at around two million in the final year. If we look at people staying in an island, the trend is similar. It remains stable at nearly 0. 8 million in 2011. The figure grows sharply reaching 1. 5 million in 2013, then levels off in the following two years. After that we can see a fluctuation until 2017. Finally, as a total the number of all visitors starts up at 1 million and it increase sharply reaching approximately 2. 8 million at 2015. IT stands steady in the following year followed by a rise at 3. 5 million in the final year.

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many
 visitors travelling to a certain Caribbean island over a

seven-year period between 2010 and 2017.

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visitors
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seen
 in 2017.

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details
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million
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million
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over
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million
 in the final year.

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8
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 in 2011. The figure grows sharply
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million
 in 2013, then levels off in the

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following
 two years. After that we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 a fluctuation until 2017.

Finally
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starts
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increase
sharply
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approximately
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