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THE GRAPH SHOWS THE POPULATION CHANGE BETWEEN 1940 AND 2000 IN THREE DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN THE U.S STATE OF OREGON.

THE GRAPH SHOWS THE POPULATION CHANGE BETWEEN 1940 AND 2000 IN THREE DIFFERENT COUNTRIES IN THE U. S STATE OF OREGON. Wqq2K
THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF POPULATION IN 3 DIFFERENT COUNTRIES OVER A PERIOD OF 60 YEARS. OVERALL, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE LINE GRAPH THAT THE RATIO OF WASHINGTON WAS THE HIGHEST, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF COLUMBIA WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE GIVEN PERIOD. INITIATING AT 75 THOUSANDS IN 1940 AND RISE TO 135 THOUSANDS, LAST YEAR THE AVERAGE OF WASHINGTON POPULATION IMMENSELY GROW BY 240 THOUSANDS OUT OF 250 THOUSANDS IN 2000. ALTHOUGH ONLY 30 THOUSANDS IN 1940 AND EXTENSION TO 50 THOUSANDS LAST YEAR, THE NUMBER OF YAMHILL POPULATION EXTREMELY ELEVATION BY 105 THOUSANDS IN 2000. LAST COUNTRY IS COLOMBIA. IN COLOMBIA 30 THOUSANDS IN 1940 AND SLIGHTLY INCREASE TO 45 THOUSANDS, THE QUANTITY OF COLOMBIA POPULATION IS SOAR. SO THAT, THE PROPORTION OF COLOMBIA POPULATION EXPANSION BY 90 THOUSANDS OUT OF 250 THOUSANDS.
THE LINE GRAPH ILLUSTRATES THE INFORMATION ABOUT HOW MUCH PERCENTAGE OF
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, IT IS MANIFEST FROM THE LINE GRAPH THAT THE RATIO OF WASHINGTON WAS THE HIGHEST, WHEREAS THE RATIO OF COLUMBIA WAS THE LOWEST THROUGHOUT THE
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30 THOUSANDS IN 1940 AND EXTENSION TO 50 THOUSANDS LAST YEAR, THE NUMBER OF
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EXTREMELY
ELEVATION BY 105 THOUSANDS IN 2000. LAST COUNTRY IS COLOMBIA. IN COLOMBIA 30 THOUSANDS IN 1940 AND
SLIGHTLY
INCREASE TO 45 THOUSANDS, THE QUANTITY OF COLOMBIA
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EXPANSION BY 90 THOUSANDS OUT OF 250 THOUSANDS.
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