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The table below gives information about the canned tuna imports in Germany.

The table below gives information about the canned tuna imports in Germany. qR6Pa
The table presents the number of canned fish imports in Germany from various countries from 2003 to 2008. Overall, it can clearly be seen, in the given time duration, the total amount of Importation of canned tuna in Germany was continuously soaring. Nonetheless, the highest amount of export of canned fish was done by the Philippines to Germany. As it can observe, the importation of canned fish from Ecuador and Indonesia has increased marginally from 2003 to 2008. The export rate from Ecuador rose from 5000 tonnes to nearly 29000 tonnes whereas, from Indonesia, it soared by more than 5000 tonnes. However, the exportation of tinned fish from Seychelles and France to Germany has declined by 60% and almost 90%. Moreover, The export of packet fish from the Philippines to Germany was the highest among all the nations, in almost all the years. In the 5 years, the amount of export was always more than 18000 tonnes. In 2003, almost 11 and 12 thousand tonnes of canned tuna-fish Germany was purchase from Papua NG and other nations, and till 2008, the purchase amount was fish from both the countries was stood at 6 to 7 thousand respectively.
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fish imports in Germany from various countries from 2003 to 2008.

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time duration, the total
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amount
of Importation of
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tuna in Germany was
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amount
of
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export
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canned
fish
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by the Philippines to Germany.

As it can observe, the importation of
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canned
fish from Ecuador and Indonesia has increased
marginally
from 2003 to 2008. The
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export
rate from Ecuador rose from 5000 tonnes to
nearly
29000 tonnes whereas, from Indonesia, it soared by more than 5000 tonnes.
However
, the exportation of tinned fish from Seychelles and France to Germany has declined by 60% and almost 90%.

Moreover
, The
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export
of packet fish from the Philippines to Germany was the highest among all the nations, in almost all the years. In the 5 years, the
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amount
of
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export
was always more than 18000 tonnes. In 2003, almost 11 and 12 thousand tonnes of
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canned
tuna-fish Germany was
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purchase
from
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NG and other nations, and till 2008, the
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was fish from both the countries
was stood
at 6 to 7 thousand
respectively
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