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The maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today.

The maps below show Pebbleton 20 years ago and today. yDR0V
The two maps display the differences between Pebbleton from twenty years ago and today's one. Pebbleton is a territory that is surrounded by sea on the west and north and by river on the south. Overall, the most considerable transformations refer to the following places: a film studio, an old fort, and a house line. The building that was a film studio twenty years ago was converted into a block of flats, while the old fort to the north of it was transformed to a children's playground. The house line located not far from the old fort to the east from it was expanded in number and three more buildings were constructed. Moreover, a number of new places were built in Pebbleton. Firtsly, a community centre between the house line and children's playground. Secondly, tennis courts appeared on the west side of Lighthouse Lane. Thirdly, two new roads were constructed including a footpath near the tennis courts and a roadbridge that now links Pebbleton to the land located on the south side of the river.
The two maps display the differences between
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Pebbleton
from twenty years ago and
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today
's one.
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Pebbleton
is a territory that
is surrounded
by sea on the west and north and by river on the south.
Overall
, the most considerable transformations refer to the following places: a film studio, an
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old
fort, and a
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house
line. The building that was a film studio twenty years ago
was converted
into a block of flats, while the
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old
fort to the north of it
was transformed
to a children's playground. The
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house
line located not far from the
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old
fort to the east from it
was expanded
in number and three more buildings
were constructed
.
Moreover
, a number of new places
were built
in
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Pebbleton
.
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Firtsly
, a community
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centre
between the
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house
line and children's playground.
Secondly
, tennis courts appeared on the west side of Lighthouse Lane.
Thirdly
, two new roads
were constructed
including a footpath near the tennis courts and a
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roadbridge
that
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now
links
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Pebbleton
to the land located on the south side of the river.
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