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bar chart for olympic winners in twelve different countries.

bar chart for olympic winners in twelve different countries. OyrG3

This bar chart shows the numbers of olympic winners in twelve different countries. According to what is shown, the country with the most gold medals it is USA, which has won nearly 1000 gold medals. In second place and won nearly 500 medals is the Soviet Union, then, there is China, Italy and UK, they have got about the same number of these medals, after these countries, there are other countries that have a small difference between the number of winners, and among them are France, Germany, China and Japan. While a lot of countries have silver and bronze medals as well, almost except USA and Soviet Union, most countries have roughly the same number of silver medals winners, and the same goes for bronze medals. To sum up, we could say that USA and Soviet Union ranked first and second place on the Olympic medals chart, on the contrary of others countries, that got less than 500 medals.

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