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Different times in Canada

Different times in Canada 5LbxD

The graph represents the percentage of international students who graduated from different universities in Canada between 2001-2006. Overall, the province with the most international students graduating in 2006 was New Brunswick in 2006. While the lowest percentage in that same year was Alberta. In 2001, the province with the most students was New Brunswick and the lowest was Ontario. Referring to 2006, we can see that there was a very high change in the percentage of international students, this is because people really want to create new experiences, meet new people and learn from different cultures, in the only province in which the 2001 percentage is higher, it is in Alberta. On the other hand, we have the students from 2001, they are fewer since the times were different, people were more afraid because they did not know the lifestyle as it is known today thanks to technology and the media.

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