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The table below gives information about the average percentage of money per month spent by consumers on fashion/clothing, entertainment/leisure and transport in 5 different countries. ​ Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the average percentage of money per month spent by consumers on fashion/clothing, entertainment/leisure and transport in 5 different countries. ​ 2Kdj6
The data illustrates the percentages of money spent on 3 types of goods and services by consumers in 5 countries.  Overall, consumer spending is highest on entertainment/leisure in all 5 countries and lowest on fashion/clothing with the exception of Singapore. Entertainment/leisure takes up the largest percentage of consumer spending in each country. It is highest in Singapore at 33. 5% and lowest in France at 22. 4%. In four countries, transport is the sector with the second highest consumer spending. Spending on transport in the 3 European countries is similar at 23. 4%, 21. 3% and 19. 6% in Germany, France and the UK respectively, considerably higher than in the two Asian countries. Spending in Hong Kong for example stands at 14. 2%. The sector with the lowest average monthly consumer spending in four of the countries is fashion/clothing. Interestingly, it is lowest in Europe where it ranges between 8. 1% in France and 5. 3% in the UK while in Hong Kong and Singapore it is higher at 11. 6% and 15. 8% respectively. The lowest consumer spending in Singapore is on transport at 4%, the lowest spending on any sector in any country.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the average percentage of money per month spent by consumers on fashion/clothing, entertainment/leisure and transport in 5 different countries. ​

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