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The chart below shows the percentage coming to australia between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market.

The chart below shows the percentage coming to australia between 1985 and 1995 and Australia's share of the Japanese tourist market. y7JQM

The line graph illustrates, percentage of gain by Australia for holding the share of Japan's tourist market from 1985 to 1994. Overall, the percentage of returns were increasing dramatically over the given period. At end of the year it reaches to peak. In 1985, the percentage coming to Australia from Japan's tourist market was stood at 2percentage. Over the following three years the proportion were rose dramatically to 1percentage per year. However, a sudden dip was reported in the year 1989 of 1percentage. After that, the percentage coming to Australia started to increase gradually. In the year 1990, it touches nearly to 5percentage and continuing the increase for reamaining years. Meanwhile, in 1993 ratio reached at its peak which is above 6percentage and levelling of at this rate for the rest of the year.

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