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The pictorial map compares a sports stadium of a university between 1990 and the present.

The pictorial map compares a sports stadium of a university between 1990 and the present. XydAE

The pictorial map compares a sports stadium of a university between 1990 and the present. Overall, many areas are now placed indoors instead of outdoors like it used to be before, which affords for the expansion of other sports courts. While certain areas of new sports are introduced, spaces for community have been completely removed. Noticeably, the place where we could find the pool, the coffee shop and the reception remains the same. However, compared to the past, all of those spaces are now put under a roof. Similarly, the changing room was also outdoors and only had the same size as the reception board, but at the present, it has the same length as the pool has. The new building also provides enough space for a fitness centre which is also next to the changing room. Conversely, the large park and the car park which were on the left side of the map in 1990 are completely swiped out of the new plan. Instead, the tennis courts which were on the right are placed with two courts adding to the other two courts already built. The left space is for a basketball playground, which is a new idea of the university.

The pictorial map compares a sports stadium of a university between 1990 and the present.

Overall
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many
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now
 placed indoors instead
 of outdoors like it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
, which affords for the expansion of other sports You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
. While certain areas of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 sports are introduced
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
spaces
 for community have been completely removed.

Noticeably
, the place where we could find the pool, the coffee shop and the reception remains the same. However
, compared to the past, all of those You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
spaces
 are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 put under a roof. Similarly
, the changing room was also
 outdoors and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 had the same size as the reception board, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 at the present, it has the same length as the pool has. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 building also
 provides This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 for a fitness Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 which is also
next
 to the changing room.

Conversely
, the large park and the car park which were on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
 side of the map in 1990 are completely swiped out of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
 plan. Instead
, the tennis You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 which were on the right are placed
 with two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 adding to the other two You use this word too often, consider replacing it withstreet
courts
 already built. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withslotarenacapacityzoneareaspot
space
 is for a basketball playground, which is a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlatedifferentstate-of-the-artmodernunusualunfamiliar
new
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :thoughtconceptnotion
idea
 of the university. 