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The line graph gives information about the number of international conferences in three cities.

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The line chart provides information about the International Conferences held in three various cities between 1965 and 2010. The data is in the number of conferences per year. Overall, it is seen clearly from the given line graph that city C showed an upward trend, while city a and city b fluctuated throughout the period. To comments with, as regards city A, accounted for 35 conferences in the year 1965, which fluctuated between 20 and 30 in the following forty years. In addition, it decreased to 20 conferences by 2010. Moreover, the proportion of city b was around 32 meetings in the beginning year, and a decline of five was observed after fifty years. Furthermore, the initial figure of city c was closely one conference in 1965, which showed a positive trend in the following years. Lastly, it comprised approximately 29 Conferences by the end, which was the highest on this list.
The line chart provides information about the International
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Conferences
held in three various
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cities
between 1965 and 2010. The data is in the number of
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conferences
per year.

Overall
, it is
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seen
clearly
from the
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line graph that city C
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showed
an upward trend, while city a and city b fluctuated throughout the period.

To comments with, as regards city A, accounted for 35
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conferences
in the
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year
1965, which fluctuated between 20 and 30 in the following forty years.
In addition
, it decreased to 20
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conferences
by 2010.
Moreover
, the proportion of city b was around 32 meetings in the beginning
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year
, and a decline of five
was observed
after fifty years.

Furthermore
, the initial figure of city c was
closely
one
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conference
in 1965, which
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showed
a
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positive
trend in the following years.
Lastly
, it comprised approximately 29
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Conferences
by the
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end
, which was the highest on this list.
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