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The diagram shows the process of orange juice.

The diagram shows the process of orange juice. aQngw

The process illustrates how to produce orange juice. Overall, it is clear, that this process contains many steps, from the initial transport of oranges to factory to retailer shops for customers. In detail, fresh oranges are transported in a factory then all oranges are washed in a machine. After oranges are washed then some extra oranges are added. Further, this produces two things, one is waste solid which is used for animal feed. And, fresh juice is packed and available in the shops for customers, while some parts of the juice are transported in refrigerator trucks for evaporation. In the next step, water is released through evaporation and concentrate juice is released. This concentrated liquid is then canned. After that, cans are transported in a truck and are stored in a warehouse. In the last step, cans are further moved to the factory for packaging in which water is added with concentrate juice. After that juice is available for customers in shops.

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juice
. Overall
, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
, that this process contains This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 steps, from the initial transport of oranges to factory to retailer shops for customers. In detail, fresh oranges are transported
 in a factory then all oranges are washed
 in a machine. “After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
 oranges are washed
 then This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 extra oranges are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
. Further
, this produces two things, one is waste solid which is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for animal feed. And, fresh You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is packed
 and available in the shops for customers, while This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 parts of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
are transported
 in refrigerator trucks for evaporation. In the next
 step, water is released
 through evaporation and concentrate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
is released
. This concentrated liquid is then canned. After that, cans are transported
 in a truck and are stored
 in a warehouse. In the last step, cans are further
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocated
moved
 to the factory for packaging in which water is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 with concentrate You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
. After that You use this word too often, consider replacing it withextractoilalcoholsauceliquordrink
juice
 is available for customers in shops. 