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The diagram demonstrates the development taken placed in Ships mouth town between 1995 and 2010, in a Perrod of 15 years.

The diagram demonstrates the development taken placed in Ships mouth town between 1995 and 2010, in a Perrod of 15 years. Ol8mE
The diagram demonstrates the development taken placed in Ships mouth town between 1995 and 2010, in a Perrod of 15 years. To start with, in 1995 there was Ichurch on the easter the a nooth east Side. On -Side there was a residentice area. More over, there. were two forests from which one was located on the east South direction and the Second on the north West Side of the City. A factory was there on the West South side of the town. On the South Side of Ships mouth there was was a railway Station. At last, there road for vehicle which was Passing through City Centre. On the other hand, in 2010. church was destroyed and a PUG was erected. There was a residential was demolished and Was with skycrapers. In addition. which be placed were two forests, first forest was chopped and to, there! an air fort was Put UP. However, Second forest was also chopped and the apartment blocks was built Shopping Centre Was made in Place of factory, Some major changes took placed in Station as well as Vehicle road, station was extended.
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area. More over, there.
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on the east South direction and the Second on the north West Side of the City. A factory was there on the West South side of the town. On the South Side of Ships mouth there
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was was
a railway Station. At last, there road for vehicle which was Passing through City
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Centre
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, in 2010.
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church
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destroyed
and a PUG
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skycrapers
.
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.
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which
be placed
were two
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forests
,
first
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forest
was chopped
and to, there!
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an
air fort
was Put
UP.
However
, Second
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forest
was
also
chopped and the apartment blocks
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Centre
Was made
in Place of factory,
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Some
major
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took placed in Station
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IELTS academic The diagram demonstrates the development taken placed in Ships mouth town between 1995 and 2010, in a Perrod of 15 years.

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